Wondering why/if it is necessary to specify whether or not delegation does or does not restrict holders from voting? Can this not be defined by the implementation?
Perhaps the following change would be less prescriptive.
| Original | New |
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| Delegates may vote on behalf of token holders that delegated voting rights to them. Delegation does not restrict token holders from voting themselves; in the event of token holders exercising their voting rights, their vote takes precedence over any vote cast by their delegate. Token holders can delegate or redelegate any time. | Token holders may delegate their voting rights to others. Token holders may change their delegations at any time. |